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I feel like being pretentious and ridiculous

green leaves fall in a zephyr; creek water creeps onto the banks; a lamp lights the long path forward.
phat phlame 
phat phlame was
super hot inferno phlame
a fight for phat flaming survival
i'll send you into phat phlames
ring ring rattlesnake ring from the phat phire pit
ring ring rattle.
bars.
elastic smoke stuck to stretchable ground 
bars.
ding ding ding
bars. 
lazy lightning on the treadmill runs for a carrot suspended above, never to obtain it. tragic.
bars.

this is art.
it is also nonsense that is not art.
its up to the interpreter.
but its art.

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  1. AnonymousOctober 17, 2018 at 4:08 PM

    I really like this. Your alliteration is really good. I assume that the use of "ph" instead of "f" is a reference to something? I like the phrases "elastic smoke" and "lazy lightning on the treadmill". I'm not sure what this is about, though.

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